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Old Jan 7th, 2013, 23:01 PM   1
EmmaRea
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Help please! :) Does this shower invite poem sound too goofy?


Our theme is At The Pond/Frogs and Turtles, and I found out yesterday that I need to make my own baby shower invitations. So I'm playing with some words and would like the opinions of you lovely ladies!

The invites are landscape half page cardstock with a blue background, a little picture of some frogs and lily pads and dragonflies that stretches across the bottom, and then the wording on top. So this is what it says...

"The word's out at the pond,
According to the wind in the trees,
Baby boy Harrison will soon make three!

Join the mommy frog and daddy frog
To welcome the new little pollywog!

T**** & T***** are having a baby shower on
Sunday, February 3rd, 2013
At their home at 3:00 in the afternoon.
(yada yada yada RSVP stuff)


PS: 'Pollywog' is another word for tadpole around here...

So what do you think? Cute or too goofy? Any ideas? Your help is much appreciated! Thanks in advance!



 
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Old Jan 7th, 2013, 23:06 PM   2
Sushai
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Too cute! I like it the way it is.



 
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Old Jan 7th, 2013, 23:11 PM   3
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I think it sounds really cute! You will have to post pictures when you are done! I also love the pond theme.



 
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Old Jan 7th, 2013, 23:48 PM   4
DessyMarie
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Awe, it's adorable! I love it



 
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