Feeling - my poem - sums up how were all feeling

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  1. natthecat

    natthecat 2 years TTC #1

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    I see the vision, when I sleep
    and it's such a sweet dream
    but I know that it's not real
    and when I wake I could scream

    Every day when I wake
    it's the first thing in my mind
    It's there in my head,
    don't have to search too hard to find

    It's running through my head
    all of the time
    and when I see them and their bumps
    I really want them to be mine

    I dream, of the feeling,
    of someone in me, growing inside
    thinking of all the thoughts I have
    all the Love I'd provide

    To feel them moving hear their heart beat
    knowing they're part of me
    and that every day I would cherish
    I'd be as happy as can be

    Why is it never me
    When will I get my turn
    'cos I've been trying so long
    and it's more than just a yearn

    I'm longing for the day
    I hold a young one my arms
    keeping warm keeping safe
    shielding from harm

    Grant me just one wish
    Please hear my prayer
    Bless my womb with a child
    And leave me floating on air.
     
  2. Mrs R

    Mrs R Well-Known Member

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    Aww hun this is lovely, I esp. like the last verse
     
  3. Stardancer

    Stardancer Well-Known Member

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  4. maz

    maz TTC #1 since Oct 2004

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    I like it too hun ... it will be your turn soon - as it will be for the rest of us

    :hug:
     
  5. DaisyDuke

    DaisyDuke Matilda Tasya's mum :)

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    That is beautiful :hugs:
     
  6. vickie83

    vickie83 Mama to 2 little ladybugs

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    Thats lovely
     
  7. littlestar

    littlestar Proud Mum to a Little Boy

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    That's beautiful - thank you for sharing

    :hug:
     
  8. natthecat

    natthecat 2 years TTC #1

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    always written poetry and just thought there were a few recent posts that people thought they were on their own about how they were feeling!
     
  9. timinolola

    timinolola Member

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  10. wannabemumvc

    wannabemumvc New Member

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    i cant believe how much that is how i feel i struggle to put it into words - you made me cry
     
  11. NavyWife84

    NavyWife84 Wanting a Navy Baby

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    Very beautiful. You definitely got all the thoughts and emotions in there. Thank you for sharing!
     
  12. mmr01241979

    mmr01241979 Member

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    Perfect words for such a heartbreaking subject...this is exactly how I feel..thank you.
     
  13. lbm2009

    lbm2009 Well-Known Member

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    Beautiful, you made my eyes well up!
     

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