Midwifery Application - Personal Statement

[Hannah93]

Hi,

Just wondering if anybody could read my personal statement for university and let me know what you think.

At the minute it is too long so I need to cut bits out too.

Thanks in advance

 

[hopeandpray]

I'll have a read if you'd like! Just PM it to me. I haven't done midwifery but wrote a personal statement for medicine before.

 

[ArcaneSpark]

Happy to read it!

 

[Hannah93]

Hi,

Thanks for offering to red my personal statement. Could you please tell me how to send I in in a pm. I can't ind the options.

 

[yellowpetal]

I'll have a read, I did a personal statement for a different degree last year, was told it was the best they ever read from my tutor! haha, feel free to PM me. x

 

[Hannah93]

How do I PM please?

 

[yellowpetal]

Oh, not sure! ill wait for someone else to tell you lol.

Also, id advise posting your statement on the student room, theres a section were you post your statement, so that is private and only seen my moderators / people who are excellent with personal statements who read through yours. They then give you tips and advice, my statement was shocking before I went on there. Afterwards, my tutor made a big fuss of how good it was, and I got accepted by all 5 universities. xx

 

[Hannah93]

I have posted it there I got some advice on it but it seemed like they want me to take most of the stuff that I though was good out.

Thanks anyway

 

[superbecks]

Hi, I am just about to qualify as a midwife in the next three weeks so will have a read if u like x