Jennmclean
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My sisters getting married June 29th 2013. I'm her maid of honor and she would like me to do a poem during the ceremony. I've come up with one that needs a bit of work but I would like some feedback on What I've got so far!!
All critisim accepted and appreciated!
Sister on this special day*
With all your family and friends*
I can't help but think of the olden days
When we would share a bed*
Taking turns tickling backs*
Boy how things have changed*
Marc has taken my spot in bed*
But my love for you remains
You two have been made for one another*
And I know this to be true*
I'm not losing a sister but gaining a brother too.*
From now on and till the end of time*
You two will live to be*
One of the greatest love stories*
Anyone has witnessed to see.*
All critisim accepted and appreciated!
Sister on this special day*
With all your family and friends*
I can't help but think of the olden days
When we would share a bed*
Taking turns tickling backs*
Boy how things have changed*
Marc has taken my spot in bed*
But my love for you remains
You two have been made for one another*
And I know this to be true*
I'm not losing a sister but gaining a brother too.*
From now on and till the end of time*
You two will live to be*
One of the greatest love stories*
Anyone has witnessed to see.*
