Marchlands

[rosie272]

I really hope summat good happens at the very end!!!
Bit dull...

 

[AppleBlossom]

Are people thinking the grandmother did it?

 

[Pikefoldpixel]

Theres got to be more too it...there would be a splash or ripples at least

 

[Reedy]

Anyone else wondering why Alice just disappeared in the water after about a minute???

 

[Harveysmum369]

the flowers on Alice's grave must have been Olive....


I hope there is a twist,as otherwise Nisha and Mark have no reason to be in the story....

 

[AppleBlossom]

Did think she wouldn't drown that quickly

 

[mommy43]

theres got to be a twist to connect mark n nisha

 

[mommy43]

yes surely if she slipped she would be there in front of him at edge of the water when he got to the lake

 

[Every Rose]

Perhaps Mark and Nisha are only in it to give Ruth a reason to get back into the house.

 

[samzi]

Please dont tell me she is going to drown the baby?!

 

[mommy43]

didnt olive think it was strange when she took the baby n not the buggy?????????????????

 

[Tsia]

yes eternal rose i agree

 

[Every Rose]

She wouldn't hurt someone elses child, she knows how much it hurts to lose one.

 

[samzi]

Phew, thank god for that!

 

[Every Rose]

So far Mark and Nisha being in it make more sense than Amy's family being in it.

 

[Reedy]

Bit of a crap ending really x still some unanswered questions like what the he'll happened to Alice & where's Paul?

 

[Harveysmum369]

I am so disappointed...was a naff ending...

 

[Tsia]

oh they painted over it!!!!

 

[emmi26]

oh bugger baby was crying missed it so it was grandad and olives mum having affair how did alice get in the water ??

 

[Blah11]

yawn :\